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Wednesday, June 15, 2011

A Tall Tale

On a fine Saturday morning me and my little brother were playing rugby league on the backyard and said this getting boring” and guess who came to play with me and my brother Benji Marshall! and Billy Slater. Benji Marshall was on my team and billy Slater was on my little brother’s team, Benji Marshall said to go to his car so we could drive to mount smart stadium. when we arrived there me and Benji kicked of to my brother and billy. my little brother had the ball and I ran right up to him and did a big hit.

and My brother lost the ball and I picked it up and billy was right on the try line and I got pass him and got a try and Benji converted the ball billy kicked it of then Benji had the ball and he got hit and then I had to run the I got hit.the It got to the final play we were close to the try line Benji passed it to me and I did a little kick and Benji ran and dived for the ball and got a try. at the end of the game me and Benji WON!!! 24-16 we went to KFC and we all had a double down burger an we went home and said good bye.

1 comments:

Anonymous said...

Great story! very imaginative and I could picture you and your brother playing with Benji and Billy at Mt Smart. Your creative words and descriptive language made it an interesting story. Keep it up and I can't wait for the next one, tino pai!
Matua Wyllis

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